Thursday, 13 December 2012
Tuesday, 27 November 2012
mc donald's
The man is late for the scan of his child because he was
buying a 99p Mcflurry. This is basically saying that you can be late for
anything if you are buying a Mc Donald’s and no one will mind. Mc Donald’s are
saying that they are worth being late for and not showing up. If you are late
they are saying that, that person will forgive you because it’s Mc Donald’s.
Thursday, 1 November 2012
100 word ghost story
Eloise lifted the silver chamber stick to her lips, with the tiniest breath the candle went out. Smoke rising in a soft weaving plume. Behind her, a sudden white glow caught her attention. She turned to see a white lady, dressed in a waterfall of silk, with long white curls over pale skin.
“Will you come with me?” whispered the white lady, slowly extending a pale white hand out to her.
“To where?” Eloise asked.
“To Dream’s End and new beginnings.” she whispered back.
Eloise shakily took her hand, and the white glow enveloped her. And all that she knew paled into insignificance.
i think this story because they had thought about it and it really grabs the readers attention because you want the know what happens after she took the ladies hand. They also describe the lady in detail but not that much that you start to get bored.
Friday, 26 October 2012
5 card flicker
It was the
night of Halloween and me and my friend were on our way to go and see 1
direction live we had are tickets and are back stage passes. On our way to the
concert we came across a big black building. It was old, creepy, scary and had
a haunted look about it. It reminded me of those creepy black building, you see
in horror films were you scream at the telly to tell the people not to go in.
We advantaged
in any way to see what it was like, the house was covered in Halloween decorations,
this gave the impression that there was live in the old building, did someone
live here? We wondered up stairs, my friend was holding on to me in case
something happened to her or to me. It didn’t look like anyone lived here the
house was covered in cobwebs. It didn’t bother me, that I was missing out on trick or treating
because I was going to meet the band I love.
We had
somehow found ourselves in the kitchen we knew this because there was pasta
everywhere, everywhere you looked, pasta, pasta and more pasta we were guessing
that this person loved pasta. We wanted to know what was in the front room so
we went to have a look, I felt something go across my feet I scream at the top
of my voice and jumped into my friends arms. She didn’t know what was happening
until I told her I felt something go across my feet she looked down and saw a
lizard and picked it up, I jumped with fright and then realised that it was
only a baby lizard, my friend had her own pet lizard so wasn’t scared picking
it up.
Olivia my friend wanted to look around the
rest of the house but I didn’t, but I didn’t want to sit in the car all on my
own so I can with her just to look in 2 more rooms (the back bedroom and the
back room down stairs). Back up the stairs we went my hand were shaking and the
room went all dizzy I was that scared I held on the Olivia arm , she didn’t
look one bit scared any more I didn’t know why I didn’t want to know at that
very moment. The back bedroom was different to all the rest it wasn’t dark I
was full of little girl stuff like dolls, doll houses and pink things. This was
a bit strange because the rest of the house was all dark and black but this one
room and covered in pink girly stuff, there was one poster up on the wall it
was a 1 direction poster. Whoever this little girl was she really loved 1
direction more than me because as we went further in to her room there on the
bed was the 1 direction blanket. If we saw the girl we were going to ask her if
she wanted to come the see them with us and as soon as I had said that the
little girl had said I would love to see them with you just let me get my coat.
She had long black hair all the way down to the floor and was as whit as snow.
On the car
journey to the concert the radio was playing 1 direction live while we are
young and all 3 of us sang are way to the concert and got to meet them back
stage to
Thursday, 11 October 2012
homework for friday 12/10/12
On the 12th
of may 1986 19 climbers started climbing mount hood in America at 3 am. During
the accent 6 members turned back early because of illness or exhaustion. The
other climbers climbed to above 3000m level. Around 3 pm they had to turn because
due to poor weather conditions. They took the decision the sleep over on the
mountain so started to dig a snow cave for protection. The next day 2 members
of the party went down the mountain to summon help. On the 14 th may, the
search party found 3 climbers frozen to death and the other 8 members of the
party were found on the 15 th of may in a snow cave. Only 2 of the 8 members found
alive. 3 of the 4 survivors had life- threatening hypothermia and one had to
have their legs amputated.
Tuesday, 2 October 2012
"£1.74"
carbored box -for shelter- free
sandwitch-for food -£1.44
water-for drink-30p
sleeping bag-for warmth-free already had it
Sunday, 23 September 2012
homelessness
1. 1 out of every 3 homeless people are under
the age of 18.
2. A third of all runaways will attempt
suicide.
3. Half of all runaways left home because of a
disagreement with a parent or guardian.
4. This year, one in 260 runaways and homeless
youths will die from assault, illness and suicide.
5. 1.6 to 1.7 million people under 18 will
experience homelessness each year.
Sunday, 16 September 2012
touching the void homework
I lolled on the rope, scarcely able to
hold my head up. He was an experienced
climber but because of the cold he was having trouble holding on to the rope
and holding his head up. He was tired
and was hoping that the situation would end soon. He didn’t want to
suffer. He just wanted it to be over.This created tention by showing that was wansnt able he was scarcely able.
How long will you be Simon? I thought.
How long you join me?
He was doubting his ability to save his friend. He was worried that they would both to their
deaths and he couldn’t do anything to prevent it. Nobody would know what had happened to them.This creates tention because he is asking questions so maybe he was worried about that his friend had gone or somehting had happen to his friend.
The torch beam died because the cold
had killed the batteries. The storm was
over. He was pleased that the danger had
perhaps gone. Maybe he would be able to
save them after all. Things looked
bright and he felt like he was floating on air.
He was at peace.This created tention becuiase he doesnt know what is there or what is going the happen to him and his freind.
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