mc donald's

The man is late for the scan of his child because he was buying a 99p Mcflurry. This is basically saying that you can be late for anything if you are buying a Mc Donald’s and no one will mind. Mc Donald’s are saying that they are worth being late for and not showing up. If you are late they are saying that, that person will forgive you because it’s Mc Donald’s.

100 word ghost story

 
Eloise lifted the silver chamber stick to her lips, with the tiniest breath the candle went out. Smoke rising in a soft weaving plume. Behind her, a sudden white glow caught her attention. She turned to see a white lady, dressed in a waterfall of silk, with long white curls over pale skin.

“Will you come with me?” whispered the white lady, slowly extending a pale white hand out to her.

“To where?” Eloise asked.

“To Dream’s End and new beginnings.” she whispered back.

Eloise shakily took her hand, and the white glow enveloped her. And all that she knew paled into insignificance.

i think this story because they had thought about it and it really grabs the readers attention because you want the know what happens after she took the ladies hand. They also describe the lady in detail but not that much that you start to get bored.