I lolled on the rope, scarcely able to
hold my head up. He was an experienced
climber but because of the cold he was having trouble holding on to the rope
and holding his head up. He was tired
and was hoping that the situation would end soon. He didn’t want to
suffer. He just wanted it to be over.This created tention by showing that was wansnt able he was scarcely able.
How long will you be Simon? I thought.
How long you join me?
He was doubting his ability to save his friend. He was worried that they would both to their
deaths and he couldn’t do anything to prevent it. Nobody would know what had happened to them.This creates tention because he is asking questions so maybe he was worried about that his friend had gone or somehting had happen to his friend.
The torch beam died because the cold
had killed the batteries. The storm was
over. He was pleased that the danger had
perhaps gone. Maybe he would be able to
save them after all. Things looked
bright and he felt like he was floating on air.
He was at peace.This created tention becuiase he doesnt know what is there or what is going the happen to him and his freind.
Then,
what |I had waited for pounced on me.
Suddenly things changed as the rope lashed violently against my face and
I fell silently as if in a dream. Did he
fall or was he just dreaming because of the cold.This created tention because we dont know what he was waiting for so it could be anything.